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It's hard to tell when it's late...
Sometimes one can push even fate...
Once they believe they found their soul mate.

I can bet tonight you lay awake...
Thinking of what life can give and take...
And wondering what is real and what is fake.

You see, what I have to say can't wait...
At the moment it is 7am past eight...
And the right words my mind still can't create.

Every moment I try to tell you...
Every word would come out wrong...
So I have to tell you I love you...
In a poem.

It is really just so immensely strange...
When you're away the words I perfectly arrange...
When you're near the words scatter and change.

Quickly I just run out of things to say...
My mind sits on an eternal pause of delay...
A simple sentence becomes like an essay.

Every time I think the moment is right...
The words vanish from me in full fright...
But it never seem to happen when I write.

You see, every time I try to tell you...
I can't find where the words really belong...
That's the reason I have to say I love you...
In a poem.

Please go ahead and read on if you may...
Maybe like this the right words will obey...
And the true message will display.

I think I found the way to try and tell you...
Without the words getting mixed or wrong...
I guess the real best way to say I love you...
Is in a poem.
©2009 ~Razet
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I love you... In a poem.

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:iconhanu-bis:
Nice rhyme scene.

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Well hello there.

Fine don't say hello.

On my page you'll see Literature, Drawings and Photography. So go to my Gallery Or else...:fork:
:iconrazet:
:D

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RAZET
The Poetic Master --> [link]
:iconhanu-bis:
:D

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Well hello there.

Fine don't say hello.

On my page you'll see Literature, Drawings and Photography. So go to my Gallery Or else...:fork:
:iconsavi9011:
your poems are just amazing Razet :O
:iconrazet:
One has to do their best.
:)

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RAZET
The Poetic Master --> [link]
:iconsavi9011:
and their best is better then the rest!
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Glad you enjoy them!
:heart:

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RAZET
The Poetic Master --> [link]

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